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     The pros of stem cell research far outweigh the cons. The pros that come out from stem cell research are possibly curing many rare diseases such as cancer, Alzheimer’s disease, Parkinson’s disease, ALS, spinal cord injuries, diabetes, and many others (White 2). Stem cell research has already been used to generate a few different types of organs. Scientists have used lab mice to generate ears and noses. Although small and simple, the progress scientists are making is huge. With public funding scientists will be able to make the discoveries of how to generate nervous tissue and other vital organs such as hearts, livers, kidneys, and lungs. However, there are people in the United States that think stem cell research should be banned as a whole.
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     The pros of stem cell research far outweigh the cons. The pros that come out from stem cell research are possibly curing many rare diseases such as cancer, Alzheimer’s disease, Parkinson’s disease, ALS, spinal cord injuries, diabetes, and many others (White 2).  Stem cells will be able to be used to cure these diseases. Cells that stop dementia and the deteriorating muscle cells will be generated from research. Cells that attack cancer cells or prevent cancer from spreading will also be generated from research. Organs can also be generated from these stem cells. These organs can then be used for patients in need of a transplant. There are a couple of organs that the human body needs to survive; if a patient cannot receive this organ, and then unfortunately he/she will not survive. Stem cell research has already been used to generate a few different types of organs. Scientists have used lab mice to generate ears and noses. Although small and simple, the progress scientists are making is huge. With public funding scientists will be able to make the discoveries of how to generate nervous tissue and other vital organs such as hearts, livers, kidneys, and lungs. The potential for stem cell research is massive; why not do what we can to reach that full potential? However, there are people in the United States that think stem cell research should be banned as a whole.